2023 Prize for Poetry Winners

We are pleased to announce that the 2023 Robinson Jeffers Tor House Prize for Poetry, with an honorarium of $1,000, is awarded to:

Daniel Williams
Wawona, California
for his poem
“Songs of the Sangre de Cristos”

2023 Honorable Mentions EACH WITH AN HONORARIUM OF $200,
ARE AWARDED TO:

Dan Grote
Waymart, Pennsylvania
for his poem “Castaway”

Michele Herman
New York, New York
for her poem “Frying Marbles with My Father”

Ari Mokdad
Traverse City, Michigan
for her poem “Kharma”

Valerie Nieman
Reidsville, North Carolina
for her poem “So What?”

FINAL JUDGE FOR THE 2023 PRIZE WAS JUAN FELIPE HERRERA.

THE 2023 AWARD-WINNING POEM

SONGS OF THE SANGRE DE CRISTOS

                        Canto I     

            Dance of the Corn Maidens  

Footdrum and windflute know more about flowers
            than highway knows about contours of
A land when land was soft belly and living tissue
            of races of people who breathed the
Earth with their lungs   who saw with lightning
            who heard with thunder   whose lives
Were earthlike    earthbound   whose abundance
            sprung from the land beneath their feet
Even as they walked in a day’s time and a day’s
            time was enough of a walk to see foxes
Of winter   snakes of summer   fawns of spring
            bears of autumn   and everyone spoke in
One tongue   the tongue of the earth   and it was
            enough to speak once then dream mostly
Like coals on hillsides after fires   a fine powdery
            warmth   crackling and popping gone
For a while   everything happening underneath
            that should happen   without thought
Or words but hidden and out of sight like these
            corn maidens who dance first in silence
Then a soft strumming of strings and finally to the
             raucous blossoming of their own spirits as
Though some being incensed of sage stepped down
             from a skeletal stallion to water their hearts                                            

             All our tendrils were connected then   a people
Their animal gods   their place   all in one   and everything
            related to chaparral and the stars   the earth
Cleansing itself of every waste with renewal   soothing its
            people so their circle dance would spin smoothly
On its diurnal course describing flowers of sunlight
            marigolds as round blossoms of star fire
When a child died it toddled back to its great parent
            an adult’s death meant there was a folding back
Into the great womb like the folds of a wild lily  
            an incense of sage   scorching coals of chamisa
The dead were given gifts even as they had gifted this
            world with the vitality of their lives
Then the long sweet song of their absence settled over
everything with pale petals of ash

                                     Canto II                 

Purple Iris
                                                            for Georgia O’Keeffe  

These stony cliff faces of her paintings sit flat and huge
         roseate   gray and yellow under an
Acetylene sun scoring its sacred path across blue
         invisible half-spheres tracking
 Across the far horizon beyond crystalline shoulders
          of La Joya Del Pedregal her holy place
 Smoking chipotles roast on coals at day’s end
           in blue canyons of crows crying
 Thin fillets of elk on green willow sticks
           drip fat on coals near walls eloquent
 With shadow stories tracking against darkness
           all of it the conduit for her praise of
 Del Pedregal  her mountain she believed if she
           could only paint it enough times
 Merciful gods would allow her to possess it 
           belonging to her alone in spirit even as
 She owns this trail   earth all around littered with
            her vibrant details  everywhere the notes and
 Staff for the life-songs that were her art   talus at
            bases of cliffs   Horus-like abutments
 Table mesas  chopped and broken arroyos   tiny
nameless blooms   countless brilliancies
 As common as the purple iris never explored until
            she painted her way inward with vivid colors
 Delicate brush strokes whispering clitoral dreams

 No possibility overlooked   not gray-furred coyote scat
            not ancestral stone gods or back further yet
 Deeper into canyons where she painted with no power
            no light but that which she generated alone
 Under dark stars as a tiny meteor scratches its way
            through obsidian night all but lost
 Except for its perihelion glory   as surprising as a turn
            around on her trail to find in amazement
 Two ravens floating   the lively black one above in a
            painfully blue sky the shadow one below as a
 Dark crucifix flowing like water over these hot ochre
            faces time has affixed upon Georgia’s ravines

                       Canto III     

                     Wild Grape     
                                              for D.H. Lawrence

Here sounds an empty cantilena whose wind-voice
          leaves no sounds of its singing but for  
Golden leaves of cottonwoods over water that
           click and flash with fresh earthen songs
Often have I arisen from such desultory musings                                                
           in a wood heated room behind adobe walls
Clackity-clack of an old manual Underwood
           come to rest  have peered out
Twelve-light windows at a meadow full of summer
            as if these log and chinking walls had pushed
Their way full of earth like toadstools fisting up
            into sunlight after rain  and then have I said
Hola to my angelic Ponderosa with its wildly
            arcing branches and boughs  a maenad’s
Fingertips and arms  have said buenos dias to my Frieda
            bowing in oak shadow near the horses to gather
Acorns and mast  and often have I stood on this porch
            framed with rusted leaves of wild grape
Gazing with awe past green meadow flames to the crest
             of Mt. Wheeler’s great stone god  he who never
Moves or speaks but is content to stand and watch
             Pedro up from San Cristobal to chop wood
While Manuelita his wife slaps masa between
             avid bronze palms then toasts it
On a flat stone florid with the fire of chamisa coals

Four geese from the yard call out that time is a river
          carving its way into the Parajito
And so good-byes forgotten and without words
          I return to my floorless room behind
Echoing walls where a tendril moves ever deeper
           to penetrate a webbed dark humus of love
Then sings a cantilena of cellos and pure soprano voice
            a melodic glow from somewhere just within
Hearing in counterpoint to a mauve Villa-Lobos dusk

Daniel Williams

Daniel Williams, a poet of the Yosemite region of Northern California, has published his work in many journals and anthologies.  He has a master’s degree in English Literature from San Jose State University where he studied poetry under the teaching of Nils Petersen and has taught composition and literature as an adjunct instructor at Metro State in Denver and at Columbia Community College and San Joaquin Delta College in California.  As a member of Poets & Writers and PoetsWest in Seattle, The California Federation of Chaparral Poets as well as The Ina Coolbrith Circle in the Bay Area, he has published his poems and read them on radio and in Zoom Meetings for many years  His work has taken prizes in ICC annual poetry contests.
He is the author of three chapbooks: Prince Hamlet National Park from Cyberwit.net in India; Lost Language of Mars and Angelis Salmonis and a Haunted Coastline from Moonstone Press in Philadelphia  Mr. Williams has  been nominated for a Pushcart Prize in Poetry by College of the Redwoods in Arcata, California

Honorable Mentions

CASTAWAY

Turns out this whole “free will”
thing isn’t all it’s cracked up
to be - trapped on an island
born of my bad decisions and

Poor choices, left alone to fire
off poems from behind this
penitentiary wall, stanzas
flying like sparrows out over

 The razor wire, an encyclopedia
of failures, messages left un-
answered at the bottom of a
bottle that’s been cast out

Into an ocean in which I am no
longer welcome, and I’m not
looking for anything like a
rescue, I’ve simply given up

On that, but I still feel like
screaming out into The Nothing,
making noise is just a desperate
attempt at proof of life, the

Sincerest pleas of a nobody locked
inside of himself who just
wants somebody, anybody, to
know that he’s still here.

Dan Grote

Dan Grote is an incarcerated writer whose work has appeared in a wide variety of print and online publications. He is the author of several hold-up notes, a couple of signed confessions, one book of poetry, We Are All Doing Time (Iniquity Press/Vendetta Books, 2023), and one chapbook of poetry, The Sum Total of My Mistakes (Between Shadows Press, 2022).

FRYING MARBLES WITH MY FATHER

Five-thirty every weekday
he came back to us, smells
of town and antiseptic
fresh upon his coat.
He came with Polish jokes.
He came with crocheted
scarves and horseradish
root, which was how
his poorest patients paid.
He came with jars
of sour dills. He came
with bubble wrap,
a pogo stick, a Hermes
portable, our wingèd
messenger
in elevator shoes.

I learned to read
his footfalls in the hall.
One day each year
there came no slam
of leather bag
on foyer floor,
which meant a tetanus
shot, a booster dose,
a DPT. I feared
my father’s sting.

He daubed the alcohol,
he slid the needle
deep, he slowly pressed
the plunger down,
then slipped the needle out
and smoothed
the Band-Aid on.
His hands were like
the ones that hold
this pen – blunt, precise,
with well-clipped nails.

A tender father, too,
who climbed the stairs
at night and stood above
my bed and ran a hand
across my cheek and
never spoke a word.
Did he know I was awake?
Of course; there was
nothing that he didn’t know:
Latin roots, the recipe for mayonnaise,
how to represent
himself in court without
a law degree, how to whistle
through his teeth.

He taught me how to fry
a marble and now I need
to bring him back because
I’ve forgotten whether to fry
it wet or dry, whether to bring
a friend along on Sunday afternoon
or keep him to myself.

Let me bring him up
the cellar stairs where he spent
his evenings welding steel,
into the female world.
Let me bring him up
still young, with that eagle eye
that stared
at every object until
he figured out how it 
was engineered, let me
bring him up in navy
work clothes, not a suit
that chafed around the swelling
lymph nodes in his neck,
and let him show me how
to fry the marbles
just enough
for them to crack
a thousand crazy ways
but never
fall apart.

Michell Herman

Michell Herman

Michele Herman is the author of the novel Save the Village (Regal House, 2022), which was a finalist for the 2023 Eric Hoffer Prize, and two chapbooks from Finishing Line Press: Just Another Jack: The Private Lives of Nursery Rhymes (2022) and Victory Boulevard (2018). Her poems and essays have appeared in recent issues of The Sun, Ploughshares, The Hudson Review, Carve and other journals. She spends much of the rest of her time helping other writers write better, as a longtime teacher at The Writers Studio and as a writing coach and developmental editor. She often performs her own prose and verse in the New York cabaret world, sometimes pairing up with her singing husband.

KHARMA

We barely made it; I couldn’t carry the olives’
heavy green-stretched skins in couplets of diaspora

Lebanon was invaded, the land was burned,
the smell of burnt olives turned into diaspora

I’m addressing the loss of an entire culture
never examined in couplets of diaspora

fighting against lost time, no language,
survivor’s guilt in this couplet of diaspora

We carried زيت and زيتون, hope, 
our family’s aid during couplets of diaspora

smuggled through borders, Lebanon to Syria, Jordan,
the way everything burns in couplets of diaspora

There are more Lebanese living outside
of Lebanon from couplets of diaspora

I wondered about the persimmons, the red-orange flesh,
juicy stains of sugar in couplets of diaspora

Would the persimmon trees still grow
if we could not pluck them in years of diaspora?

 The Bekaa Valley full of kharma, the fruit of the gods,
I bet you never learned that during couplets of diaspora

When we eat the persimmons now, they are soft and jelly-like
shipped across the ocean of diaspora

we never taste the tannin-rich immature fruit with firm skins
and just like the olives, disappear into couplets of diaspora

Ari L Mokdad

Ari L Mokdad

SO WHAT?

I use my grandmother’s quilts
to warm my bed. When we make love
I hear her fine stitches popping,
one two three along fault-lines
of fragments cut from old clothes—
“use it up, wear it out,
make it do, or do without.”
I’m done with doing without.

Every time I cut meat,
the knife mars the old plates.
Fragile glassware dulls each time
it’s washed. So be it.
I’m saving nothing. Goodbye
to dishes and coats and quilts
reserved “for good”—
the sexy dress Mother kept
in the closet til it no longer fit.

This body is aging—so what?
I don’t need reminders
of the ticking heart, the popping hips.
If famine’s predicted tomorrow,
there’s still a lot in the larder
and I’m having it. Strike a match.
We’re cooking it all.

Each morning I stretch
and crack joints, make room
for whatever light arrives—
the kiss, the embrace,
the invitation to slip into love
like a well-made suit that lasts and lasts,
becomes unfashionable
and then en vogue again.
Wear it out? I grab it
by the soft lapels
and press my face into its bounty.

Valerie Nieman

Valerie Nieman

Valerie Nieman has published three poetry collections, most recently, Leopard Lady: A Life in Verse. Her poems have been chosen for anthologies including You Are the River, Ghost Fishing: An Eco-Justice Poetry Anthology, and Eyes Glowing at the Edge of the Woods. Her Southern gothic suspense novel In the Lonely Backwater received the 2022 Sir Walter Raleigh Award for the best fiction by a North Carolina writer.  To the Bones, a genre-bending folk horror/thriller about coal country, was a finalist for the 2020 Manly Wade Wellman Award. She is the author of three other novels and a short fiction collection. She has held state and NEA creative writing fellowships. Nieman has degrees from West Virginia University and Queens University of Charlotte and was a reporter and farmer in West Virginia before moving to North Carolina, where she was an editor and a creative writing professor at NC A&T State University. 

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